Thank you for your comments on part one. David is not an ex of Molly's. ( "Mollie" is actually "Molly". I had the wrong spelling. [Corrected in part one - Ed.] Molly is a pro who makes her living giving spankings and more (not sex) in person and in videos. She is paid to do this and David is one of her clients.
So, David has tricked three women on a girls' night out to come with him to see Molly, not knowing Molly is going to spank him.
Let's continue from where we left off.
Molly, with her eyes focused on "the target", immediately raises her right arm up high into the air....
And down her arm and hand comes onto David's right cheek with a firm, hard SLAP! And another, left cheek! And another! Right cheek! Left cheek! Right cheek!And here we pause again. Molly has stopped and asked a question. She has opened a conversation. The women have to respond.
Molly's lips are not pursed, her brow not furrowed, not in anger. To Molly, it's just another day at the office. Molly spanks briskly, two firm smacks per second, (Marching music cadence, think of your college fight song and keep time with the smacks. "On Wisconsin, On Wisconsin, Smack, Smack, Smack, Smack, Smack..." (you're humming it to yourself right now, aren't you?)
Molly is not spanking hard, but certainly firm. It's not a particularly hard or vicious spanking, but David definitely feels each smack and may give a little "Ummm" or "Oooh!" with some smacks, but he doesn't complain or move off Molly's lap. It may not be very hard, but David is definitely getting a good, brisk spanking.
About 15 seconds in (about 30 smacks) Molly looks up without missing a beat, makes eye contact with the girls, gives them a little wink and smile, and continues to spank. At the 30-second mark Molly announces with each smack, "I. Hope. You. Are. Getting. The. Message. David." David can only give a breathless, "Yes! Ummm! Yes!"
In one minute - only one minute. - it stops! Because the girls have places to go and things to do. In one minute, after 120 smacks, Molly pauses. David's bottom is very pink and he can feel a little heat back there, but it's not too bad. So far.
Molly looks at David's now-red butt, then looks to her female guests and asks, "Whaddya think? Done?"
1. What would you say to Molly?
2. What do Susie and Mary say to her?
3. Do they say, "You go girl"? Or "That's so neat!" Or "Yes, he's had enough."
4. Or are they shocked into speechless?
These questions are for the women to answer, but the guys can jump in. Let's hear what you would say and what you think your gal pals Susie and Mary would have said. I have a pretty good idea what the Hermione reader is thinking and would say, but I still want to hear it.
I'm going to break ranks here and give my fantasy thoughts right now. My fantasy is that Susie, always the smart mouth, points at David's red bottom and says, "Look. You missed a spot." (Gawd, I love her.)
And Mary, the future Mrs. A.J., says, "Can I try that?"
Let's see your answers and then I'll continue with the final part of the story.
Readers, it's your turn. What do you think?
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Both women , having gotten past the initial shock of watching David get spanked, are now excited by the experience and eagerly want to participate.
I think we would all be shocked speechless initially but then egg Molly on to continue.
They are totally fascinated and want Molly to carry on and give David more.
Love,
Ronnie
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I think I might be a bit overwhelmed by it all and would say that's enough. Susie would say that was up to David, and Mary would say he needs more.
Hugs,
Hermione
I am no good at making up dialog, but I would guess David is going to get more licks and they will not all come from Molly.
I think, as some of you did, that it would be a little shocking/overwhelming at first to seen a man suddenly go OTK and bare bottom up, but then they would have "warmed" (see what I did there?) to the whole event. It is "life of the party" David, after all.
And what I think made it a bit OK for them was that moment during the spanking where Molly simply made eye contact with the women and gave that little smile as she continued to swat David's tush. "It's OK. They are having fun!", they would think, relieved; and more, "She's one of us! Sister power!"
The other factor: David has not complained. At all! He willingly did this and is patiently waiting, bare-bottom up on full display, over Molly's knee. No complaints. Maybe some deep breathing, but he's fine with what is happening, maybe even smiling (no doubt thinking of the embarrassment he created for the girls).
The "Suzie" I had picked (a girl I remember from college) would have been shocked at first, but I think with that eye contact Molly made, that would have eased considerably, and she would be ready if there is more to follow.
"Mary" (my college friend's then roommate) would have been all, "You go, girl!" As long as no one is being hurt or embarrassed, she would be grinning ear-to-ear or flat out laughing. I have no doubt that she dated a couple of "David's" sometime in her life.
I think they both would be perfectly fine if David got a bit more...
A.J.
PS:
There were two other women in my mind from my life I had considered.
S1 would have been shocked, uncomfortable with ALL of it. That would have eased later that night and some time had passed and she could come up with a smile.
S2 would have been laughing and, if not taken David OTK herself, would have gleefully approached and given David a couple of firm swats as he was over Molly's knee.
Remember also that earlier this night, "alcohol was involved", as police reports often say.
A.J.
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